Question

書面表達(dá)（本題共15分）

有一種節(jié)約叫光盤，有一種公益叫光盤！所謂光盤，就是吃光你盤子中的食物。拒絕浪費，珍惜糧食！針對這項行動，并根據(jù)以下提示，請你以No Wasting On Food為題寫一篇短文，號召大家參與這項活動。
注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3. 詞數(shù)：90左右。

Reasons	a waste of food, money,
	pollute the environment
	…
Suggestions	eat up all your food / clear your plate;
	leftovers（剩飯菜）…
	order less or smaller dishes
	…

 
No Wasting On Food
Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.                                                
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                             

Answer 1

Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it’s not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China, they don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.
What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.

解析試題分析：本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于節(jié)約糧食的短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)。寫作中注意將這次活動的原因介紹清楚，并提出自己希望。結(jié)合材料可知本文時態(tài)人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，涉及過去，現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。