Question

以“My Hobby”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。內(nèi)容提示：1.你的愛好是什么？2. 你為什么喜歡它？3.你平時(shí)是怎么做的？

                                                                

                                                                   

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies .For example ,someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on. My hobby is to listen to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music .Now I often listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

 Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。本文只給出寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞主題確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。