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12．最近，網(wǎng)友自發(fā)發(fā)起旨在倡導(dǎo)厲行節(jié)約，反對浪費的"光盤行動"（clear the plate），引起眾多媒體和網(wǎng)友的熱烈反響．請根據(jù)以下信息，以"My opinion on clearing the plate"為題談?wù)勛约簩�這一問題的認識和看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80-100；
2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，語言流暢；
3．不可透露學(xué)校、個人等任何真實信息．

"光盤行動"	1．在家里用餐吃多少盛多少，吃光自己盤中的食物； 2．在外就餐將吃剩的菜打包回家；
好   處	1．可以避免浪費，減少污染， 2．能養(yǎng)成我們勤儉節(jié)約、尊重糧食的好習(xí)慣．

My opinion on clearing the plate
In modern days more andmore people get richer and richer and as they begin to live a happier life，they pay less attention to food-saving．Nobody worries about food and few canthink of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world．
Recently plenty ofE-pals/net-friends carry out a clear-the-plate action on the Internet，callingon the people to save food．It suggests that we should never only eat what welike best and advises getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home．On one hand we are told to eat up all we have on our plates．On the other handwhen we go out for dinner，we must pack home all we didn't finish．In this waynot only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form agood habit of saving．
Let's join in clearing the plate．．

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分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"My opinion on clearing the plate"為題談?wù)勛约簩?光盤行動"的認識和看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．"光盤行動"；在家里用餐吃多少盛多少，吃光自己盤中的食物；在外就餐將吃剩的菜打包回家；
2．好處；可以避免浪費，減少污染．能養(yǎng)成我們勤儉節(jié)約、尊重糧食的好習(xí)慣．

常用到的重點短語：
比較級+and+比較級 越來越…
pay attention to  關(guān)注
worry about 擔(dān)心
call on 號召
on one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
eat up 吃光
not only…but also…不僅…而且…

【高分句型】
1．It suggests ①that we should never only eat②what we like best and ③advises getting suitable amount of food ④that we can have at home．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為suggest的賓語．
②what作為引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句，作為eat的賓語．
③advise doing sth 建議做某事
④that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語，修飾先行詞food．
2．①On one hand we②are told to eat up all③we have on our plates．On the other hand ④when we go out for dinner，we must pack home all⑤we didn't finish．
①on one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
②一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)am/is/are+過去分詞． tell sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
③省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語故省略，修飾先行詞all．
④when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
⑤省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語故省略，修飾先行詞all．
3．In this way not only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form a good habit of saving
not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等的成分
not only放句首引起主謂倒裝．

解答 My opinion on clearing the plates
In modern days more and more people get richer and richer and as they begin to live a happier life，they pay less attention to food-saving．Nobody worries about food and few can think of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world．
Recently plenty of E-pals/net-friends carry out a clear-the-plate action on the Internet，calling on the people to save food．It suggests that we should never only eat what we like best and advises getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home【高分句型】．On one hand we are told to eat up all we have on our plates．On the other hand when we go out for dinner，we must pack home all we didn't finish．【高分句型】（"光盤行動"的內(nèi)容）In this way not only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form a good habit of saving．（好處）【高分句型】
Let's join in clearing the plate．

點評 這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文．主要介紹光盤行動的內(nèi)容及它的好處．在寫作是要注意句子的連貫性．不能只是照著提示翻譯．
這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整．詞匯和句型句式運用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語例如：richer and richer，It suggests that…，advices getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home，On one hand，On the other hand，In this way，not only，but also等．