根據(jù)所給提示以My dream home 為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 房子很大，是一個(gè)有花園和游泳池的三層房屋，花園里長(zhǎng)滿了花，很好看。

2. 底樓有一個(gè)大的廚房和餐廳，我可以邀請(qǐng)20 多個(gè)朋友來(lái)吃飯。

3. 二樓有電腦房，和一個(gè)大客廳，可以和朋友 在客廳聊天、看電視很舒服。

4. 我有自己的臥室，大又干凈。

5. 最喜歡的地方是陽(yáng)臺(tái)，是看書(shū)，聊天的好地方。

My dream home

 

 

 

 

 

My dream home

My dream home is very big. It has three floors, and it is a building with a garden and a swimming pool. There are many kinds of flowers in the garden. They are very beautiful. There is a big kitchen and a dining hall in the first floor. I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have dinner. On the second floor, there is a computer room and a big living room. I can have a chat with my friends in the living room. It is also comfortable to watch TV in it. Of course, I will have my own bedroom. It is big and clean. My favourite place is the balcony. I can read and chat there.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息來(lái)描述一下自己理想中的家是什么樣子的，題目中給了我們?cè)敿?xì)的信息，這所房子有幾層，每一層都有哪些設(shè)施，干什么用等。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容翻譯出來(lái)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三人稱的形式。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們可能用到的句型有there be 有，表示在某地有什么東西。還有have a chat 聊天；invite 邀請(qǐng)等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照樓層的順序來(lái)描寫(xiě)，這樣可以使文章看起來(lái)有條理。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇很優(yōu)秀的范文，作文中作者非常詳細(xì)的向我們介紹了他夢(mèng)想中的家是什么樣子的。作者在描述時(shí)非常的有順序，按照每一樓層的順序，每個(gè)樓層都有什么設(shè)施，干什么用，如作者可以在一樓的餐廳里邀請(qǐng)朋友們來(lái)吃飯，在二樓的客廳里看電視，在陽(yáng)臺(tái)上看書(shū)、聊天等。敘述很有條理，不亂。內(nèi)容也很完整，包括了題目中所給的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。文章中較好的句式有It is a three-storied building with a garden and a swimming pool、I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have dinner、It is also comfortable to watch TV in it等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。

 

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