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5．提示：老師是火種，點燃了學(xué)生的心靈之火；老師是石級，承受著學(xué)生一步步踏實向上 攀登．但現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)總是對老師有抵觸情緒，總覺得老師對他們太嚴格，請你根據(jù)這種情 況，換位思考一下，假設(shè)你是一位老師你會怎么做？悉心教導(dǎo)勸誘，做一名溫柔的好老師，成為學(xué)生的好朋友？還是嚴加管理，做一個學(xué)生都害怕的嚴師？請以"If I am a teacher"為題，寫一篇英語短文．
題目：If I am a teacher
要求：1）語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔．不得少于 60 個詞；
2）文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名、否則以零分計；
3）書面表達必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分．
If I am a teacher，I will be strict to my students，but if a student does something wrong，I won't tell him off or punish him，I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong．This way，maybe the student will listen to me and not do the same thing again．At least this is much better than criticizing the student and having him hate you for the rest of his live!．

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分析 【高分句型一】
①If I am a teacher，I will②be strict to my students如果我是一名老師，我將會對我的學(xué)生嚴厲．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般現(xiàn)在時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．
②be strict to sb對某人嚴格．
【高分句型二】
I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong我將會和他象朋友一樣交談告訴他他的錯誤所在．
what he has done wrong作為tell的賓語從句．

解答 If I am a teacher，I will be strict to my students，【高分句型一】（嚴厲）but if a student does something wrong，I won't tell him off or punish him，I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong【高分句型二】．（像朋友一樣）This way，maybe the student will listen to me and not do the same thing again．At least this is much better than criticizing the student and having him hate you for the rest of his live!

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