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3．如今邊走路邊玩手機的"低頭族"隨處可見．請你根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�"英語園地"，寫一篇英文，談?wù)勈褂檬謾C的利弊及你的建議．

參考詞匯：read news，take photos，have traffic accidents，affect study，be bad for neck，in my opinion…
要求：★詞數(shù)80個左右，開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)；★必須包括上述圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；★語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；★文中不得出現(xiàn)考生本人的姓名、校名及所在地名．

Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular．They are playing an important role in our life．We can use them to read news，send message，make phone calls and read all kinds of books．Besides，we can use them to enjoy music，do some shopping and play games．In a word，mobile phones have made our life more colorful．
However，they also bring us many problems．For example，if people use them while riding，they may have traffic accidents．If we spend a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study．What's more，they're bad for our eyes and necks．
In my opinion，we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�"英語園地"，寫一篇英文，談?wù)勈褂檬謾C的利弊及你的建議．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫；用手機可以看新聞，發(fā)信息，打電話，看書等等，騎車時用手機會引起交通事故，學(xué)生用手機影響學(xué)習(xí)，對眼睛和頸部有害．
2．我的建議；
 
常用到的重點短語：
play an important role  起重要作用
in a word 總之
spend+時間+on sth 花時間做某事
what's more 再者
be bad for 對…不利
【高分句型】
1．①In a word，mobile phones have②made our life more colorful．
①in a word 總之
②make sth+adj 讓某某怎么樣
2．①If we ②spend a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞may，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
②spend+時間+on sth 花時間做某事
3．①In my opinion，we shouldn't②spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly．
①In my opinion依我看來
②spend+時間+on sth 花時間做某事

解答 Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular．They are playing an important role in our life．We can use them to read news，send message，make phone calls and read all kinds of books．Besides，we can use them to enjoy music，do some shopping and play games．In a word，mobile phones have made our life more colorful．【高分句型】
However，they also bring us many problems．For example，if people use them while riding，they may have traffic accidents．If we spend a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study．【高分句型】What's more，they're bad for our eyes and necks．（描述圖畫）
In my opinion，we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly．【高分句型】（我的建議）

點評 所給材料是圖畫較為詳細(xì)，動筆前先要認(rèn)真看懂圖畫確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意不能遺漏要點．根據(jù)要點內(nèi)容可知要用簡單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)等．根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容本文人稱主要是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．寫作時要靈活運用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確