Question

17．在"感恩月"中，學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)舉行征文活動(dòng)，主題為"我?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)"
中文提示：每到周末，你都會(huì)看到媽媽忙碌的身影，媽媽忙著洗衣服，打掃屋子，買菜…還設(shè)法給你做你喜歡吃的菜．你知道媽媽平時(shí)上班很忙，為了讓媽媽周末能好好休息，于是上周末你決定幫媽媽做家務(wù)，請(qǐng)用英文敘述你幫媽媽做家務(wù)的經(jīng)過及感受．（不少于60字）
Last weekend I decided to help my mother do the housework…．
                                                              

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Last weekend I decided to help my mother do the housework．上個(gè)周末我決定幫媽媽做家務(wù)．句子中decide to do sth表示決定做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的動(dòng)詞不定式形式；help sb do sth表示幫著某人做某事，do the housework做家務(wù)．
②On Sunday morning after I got up，I began to do some washing．星期日早上起床后，我開始洗衣服．句子中after引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語從句，begin to do sth表示開始做某事，do some washing洗衣服．

解答 Last weekend I decided to help my mother do the housework（高分句型）．Because my mother is very busy and tired every day，I hope she can have a good rest this weekend．（想幫媽媽做家務(wù)以及原因）On Sunday morning after I got up，I began to do some washing（高分句型）．First，I washed my mother's，my father's and my clothes．And then I began to clean the rooms．I used the water that I washed the clothes just now to clean the rooms，because I think we should save water．After I washed all the clothes and cleaned all the rooms，I felt very tired．（具體介紹如何幫助媽媽做家務(wù)）And I can understand my mother，it's not easy for her to finish all the work not only in the office but also at home every day．（做家務(wù)給我的啟示）From today I will do some housework every day，I hope I can make my mother live easily and happily．（我的希望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 難度適中，由于貼近現(xiàn)實(shí)生活，對(duì)于大多數(shù)同學(xué)來說，有話可說，感受不同．注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第一人稱較多，主要介紹自己所做的家務(wù)及感想．寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯．