同學(xué)們即將畢業(yè),成為一個(gè)高中生了,請(qǐng)談?wù)勥@些年來你較之過去的成長和變化。80詞左右。(用used to 表達(dá))

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.In the past three years, I have been very happy and changed a lot than before.I used to be a small boy.But now I’m taller and stronger.I used to dislike talking to others and have no friends.With the help of my teachers and classmates, I’ve grown into an outstanding and sunny boy.I have many friends and get on well with others now.I’m also better at my studies.I believe in the future I will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇短文要求我們談?wù)勥@些年來你較之過去的成長和變化。根據(jù)題目要求,我們可以主要從以下幾點(diǎn)進(jìn)行表達(dá):一是過去與現(xiàn)在外貌的變化;二是過去與現(xiàn)在性格的變化;最后是學(xué)業(yè)成績等的變化等。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好,但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí),讓它變得完整、合理,內(nèi)容豐富,這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力,以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外,寫作時(shí),還需注意語句間的銜接,使文意連貫,表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者根據(jù)以上所列出的內(nèi)容,講述了自己的變化與不同,層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要,意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型,如I believe in the future I will be better and better.等。

考點(diǎn):話題類作文。

 

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