分析 這是一篇圖表作文.內(nèi)容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"為題說(shuō)說(shuō)抄襲作業(yè)的原因和危害.時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱主要為第一、三人稱.
寫(xiě)作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文,即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):
1.主要原因;作業(yè)多,難,懶惰
2.影響:違反學(xué)校規(guī)則
3.解決辦法;努力學(xué)習(xí),尋求幫忙
4.你的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ):
work out 解答出
do sb a favor 幫忙
stay up 熬夜
do harm to 對(duì)…有害
not only…but …不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1.It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework.
it作為形式主語(yǔ),that從句作為真正主語(yǔ)
2.The main reason is①that alarge amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday.
①that從句作為表語(yǔ),和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)
②which是關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句,which作為主語(yǔ),修飾先行詞homework.
3.①As far as I am concerned,as a student,we should②not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well.
①As far as I am concerned 就我而言
②not only…but …不僅…而且…連接前后兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分
解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework.【高分句型】There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday.(主要原因;作業(yè)多,難,)【高分句型】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises,in fact,it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions.(影響;養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣,違反規(guī)則)
As far as I am concerned,as a student,we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well.【高分句型】If we have difficulties,we can ask our teachers and classmates for help.(解決辦法;努力學(xué)習(xí),尋求幫忙)
We should work hard to gain knowledge.Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.(我的看法)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文,文章的題目已經(jīng)給出,而且列出了三條細(xì)節(jié).寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題,每一條都要寫(xiě)到.要注意前后句的連接,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),主語(yǔ)是第一人稱,注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題.寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.
文章主要寫(xiě)我對(duì)抄襲作業(yè)的看法,要點(diǎn)全部都寫(xiě)出,并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順,更符合要求.文中使用很多短語(yǔ),讓文章更加出彩,如It is known to us all that,a large amount of.,stay up late等.在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中,要注意點(diǎn)滴積累,這樣在寫(xiě)作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用.
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