Question

3．無(wú)論在學(xué)校或家庭，都有許多針對(duì)青少年的規(guī)則（rules），請(qǐng)寫一篇80詞以上的短文，分別談?wù)勀阕钯澩�和最反感的一兩條，同時(shí)說(shuō)說(shuō)自己對(duì)這些規(guī)則的看法或改進(jìn)建議．內(nèi)容要求：
1．介紹一兩條你最贊同的規(guī)則，并陳述理由；
2．介紹一兩條你最反感的規(guī)則，并提出改進(jìn)建議．
3．對(duì)規(guī)則的利弊做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的小結(jié)．
注意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)勀阕钯澩�和最反感的一兩條規(guī)則．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．其次考生可從三方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．介紹一兩條你最贊同的規(guī)則，并陳述理由；
2．介紹一兩條你最反感的規(guī)則，并提出改進(jìn)建議．
3．對(duì)規(guī)則的利弊做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的小結(jié)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
focus on 專注于
as for 至于
in one's opinion 依某人看來(lái)
too…to do sth 太…而不能…
參考句子：
They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．
本句中的when引導(dǎo)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，其中too…to do sth表示太…而不能…．
But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．
句中是it 作為形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用，so that引導(dǎo)的是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，they can be always effective and accepted by us．是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的運(yùn)用．

解答 We have many rules in our school．Some are good for us，I think，but others are not．For example，we are required to wear school uniforms every day．It helps us have an easy life without too much attention to dress and appearance，so we can just focus on our school work．（贊同的規(guī)則）However，as for"It's not allowed to bring mobile phones to school"，I don't think it's a good rule．．（不贊同的規(guī)則）Nowadays we are in IT generation，and mobile phones are really necessary in everyday lives even though for teenagers．In my opinion，the rule can be changed a little like this"It's not allowed to use mobile phones in class．（改進(jìn)建議）
We do need some rules both in schools or families．They are very helpful for us to make fewer mistakes when we are too young to know how to do right．（高分句型）But it would be better for teachers or parents often to sit down and listen to our opinions about rules，so that they can be always effective and accepted by us．（高分句型）（利弊總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，寫作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．