Question

養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣對我們的學(xué)習(xí)生活一直會有很大的幫助。請根據(jù)下表提示用英語寫一篇短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上。

良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣	良好的生活習(xí)慣	益 處
課前預(yù)習(xí) 認(rèn)真聽講 獨立作業(yè)	健康飲食 經(jīng)常鍛煉 利用好時間	幫助我們更好地學(xué)習(xí)知識，提高技能 使我們學(xué)會自我控制
你的感受	（請結(jié)合自身認(rèn)識，給出一至兩點）

注意：1．表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3．表達(dá)中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。
A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
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Answer 1

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.
In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. And we should learn to make good use of our time.
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: A habit is something that ……；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣等；make good use of充分利用……；連詞besides，also，and等的使用讓本文看起來更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。