Question

14．我國(guó)每年"舌尖上的浪費(fèi)"能養(yǎng)活2億人．這個(gè)數(shù)字觸動(dòng)了所有國(guó)人的心．杜絕浪費(fèi)．吃光盤(pán)中食物的"光盤(pán)行動(dòng)"得到了大眾的積極響應(yīng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法，以Save Food為題寫(xiě)一篇文章．
要求：
1.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)． 
3.1eftavers剩飯剩菜

Save Food
The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
I hope we can start now．Save food，save our lives．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)以下圖片提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法，以Save Food為題寫(xiě)一篇文章．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫(huà)；圖片中有一些人在浪費(fèi)食物，并給出一些節(jié)約糧食的建議
2．我的觀點(diǎn)和想法；
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
eat up 吃光
in a word 總之
more than 多于
dining out外出吃飯
【高分句型】
1．First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．
動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
2．We shouldn't order the food①more than we can eat②while dining out，③because many people in the world don't have enough food ④to eat．
①more than 多于
②while dining out是while we dine out 的縮寫(xiě)
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
④動(dòng)詞不定式作為后置定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的enough food．

3．①I(mǎi)n a word，I think ②③it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
①I(mǎi)n a word總之
②think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
③it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)

解答 The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200 million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．【高分句型】We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．【高分句型】Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．（描述圖畫(huà)）In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．【高分句型】（我的觀點(diǎn)和想法）

I hope we can star now．Save food，save our lives．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖畫(huà)是作文的依據(jù)，要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫(huà)的畫(huà)面，弄清畫(huà)面所反映的真實(shí)內(nèi)涵或蘊(yùn)含的某種哲理．
運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或短語(yǔ)正確表達(dá)各圖的意思．然后再將各圖的單個(gè)句子串連起來(lái)．
串連時(shí)，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語(yǔ)或過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句，不至于讓讀者覺(jué)得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然．