Question

根據(jù)漢語提示，寫一篇關(guān)于你的表弟王強(qiáng)的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)60詞左右，要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 我的表弟叫王強(qiáng)，就讀于七年級一班。他周一到周五上學(xué)。

2. 他的學(xué)校有三棟教學(xué)樓，每個教室都干凈漂亮。

3. 王強(qiáng)是學(xué)�；@球隊的隊員，他擅長打籃球。

4. 所有同學(xué)……。（此要點(diǎn)須用1-2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

My cousin is Wang Qiang . He studies in Class One, Grade Seven. He goes to school from Monday to Friday. Their school has three teaching buildings. Each classroom is nice and clean. Wang Qiang is a member of the school basketball team . He is good at playing basketball. All the classmates are nice to him. He likes his school very much.

【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文，考生在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，把握寫作要求和寫作目的。本文要求寫一篇短文，介紹自己的表弟。應(yīng)該用第三人稱做主語。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作前寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號運(yùn)用正確。還恰當(dāng)?shù)?/span>運(yùn)用了些短語和句式，如be good at ;from…to…, like … very much等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。