Question

假設(shè)2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)已經(jīng)開(kāi)始了，你作為一名奧運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者向外國(guó)朋友介紹一下北京。80詞左右。（10分）
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
                                                                                           
                                                                                        
                                                                                         

Answer 1

Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are quite a lot of places if interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China, so the winter here is long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing, because it’s cool. We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one. I’m glad to say that Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. This will give us the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. Welcome to Beijing and I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。題目中已經(jīng)給出了文章所要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容，介紹北京。學(xué)生有學(xué)過(guò)相關(guān)的課文，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，展開(kāi)想象，可以介紹北京的景點(diǎn)和美食等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意句子的完整性和表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。句子之間可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，邏輯更嚴(yán)密。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
這篇文章表述清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。文中有很多有用的表達(dá)方式和句型：As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China…如你所知，北京位于中國(guó)的北方。As you know如你所知。Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing秋天是來(lái)北京的最好季節(jié)；We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one.北京還有很多美食，其中北京烤鴨是最有名的了。這兩個(gè)句子都用到了形容詞的最高級(jí)。