Question

梅嶺中學(xué)九年級(jí)的學(xué)生最近開(kāi)了一個(gè)班會(huì)，討論如何選擇電視節(jié)目，現(xiàn)在電視節(jié)目種類(lèi)很多，各有利弊，同學(xué)們時(shí)間有限，只能有選擇地看。根據(jù)以下表格，談?wù)摳黝?lèi)電視節(jié)目的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，并發(fā)表自己的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。

電影類(lèi)別	優(yōu)點(diǎn)
紀(jì)錄片（documentary）	學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)
訪談節(jié)目(chat show)	向名人學(xué)習(xí)
新聞	了解國(guó)家與世界
喜劇（comedy）	放松自己
我的看法	1. 我喜歡 2. 喜歡的原因

Answer 1

 
Nowadays, television has become the most popular media of human kind. It’s also the indispensable device in our daily life. There are all kinds of TV programme on TV and each has its own advantage and disadvantage By watching TV , we can see many things happened in the world , but we just have limited time to watch TV at home,so we should choose the kind that suits ourselves.
We can choose documentary,chat show ,news and comedy to watch. We can learn knowledge from documentary.We can learn from the famous people by chat show.We can know the things about the country and the world by news.We can relax ourselves by comedy.
But I am fond of the CCTV News best. Its programme is rich and colorful.Firstly, it is spoken in English, we can practice our listening.Secondly, there are all kinds of world news on it, we can get a lot of available information .Although its hosts speak fast , it is really wonderful.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。第一部分寫(xiě)電視的作用，第二部分列舉一些節(jié)目的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第三部分寫(xiě)自己喜歡的節(jié)目和理由。全文主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如all kinds of , in the world,learn from ,be fond of,a lot of等短語(yǔ)，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)如it is spoken in English，狀語(yǔ)從句Although its hosts speak fast ,文章還應(yīng)用了firstly，secondly使層次更清晰。文章整體內(nèi)容飽滿，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢。