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20．某校進(jìn)行了"你最喜歡的課堂學(xué)習(xí)方式"的調(diào)查．結(jié)果表明，小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的方式受到了同學(xué)們的歡迎．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的短文，內(nèi)容須包含以下三個(gè)方面：

1．小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的好處；
2．讓你感受最深刻的一次小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷；
3．小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的方式給你帶來(lái)的收獲．
要求：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右，已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名．

Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular．It has many advantages．For example，we cannot only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups．I still remember when I was inGrade 8，my physics was very poor．I had a really hard time with it．Once in class，I studied with someclassmates together．I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics．I didn't feelstressed out at all．At last，I finished my homework by myself for the first time．How excited I was!Becauseof studying in groups，I am not worried about physics any more．I get more confidence with my classmates'help．It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)動(dòng)嘘P(guān)小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷和收獲．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的好處；
2．讓你感受最深刻的一次小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷；
3．小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的方式給你帶來(lái)的收獲．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
stressd out壓力大
not …at all 一點(diǎn)也不
at last 最后
because of 由于
be worried about 擔(dān)心…

【高分句型】
1．①For example，we can ②not only save time but also encourage each other③when we study in groups．
①for example 例如
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分．
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

2．How excited I was!
感嘆句的使用：how+adj/adv．+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)！

解答 Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular．It has many advantages．For example，we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups．【高分句型】（小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的好處）I still remember when I was in Grade 8，my physics was very poor．I had a really hard time with it．Once in class，I studied with some classmates together．I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics．I didn't feel stressed out at all．At last，I finished my homework by myself for the first time．How excited I was!【高分句型】Because of studying in groups，I am not worried about physics any more．（一次小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷）I get more confidence with my classmates'help．It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways．（帶來(lái)的收獲）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用已學(xué)的語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和已掌握的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客觀事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力．為了提高書(shū)面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫(xiě)作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫(xiě)作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫(xiě)信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫(xiě)作的好方法．