Question

請(qǐng)以“格林一家”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)如下：
格林先生是一個(gè)經(jīng)理，在離家不遠(yuǎn)的公司上班；
格林夫人是家庭主婦。她不但操持家務(wù)井井有條，還致力于慈善事業(yè)；
格林小姐剛從國(guó)外回來(lái)，是個(gè)醫(yī)生，以擅長(zhǎng)用顏色治療病人著稱；
兒子湯姆是個(gè)18歲的大學(xué)生, 有空時(shí)喜歡做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)；
他們認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在的生活……（適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充1-2句）
The Greens
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Answer 1

The Greens
Mr. Green is a manager. He works in a company not far from his home. Mr. Green, a housewife, not only does her housework very well but also devotes herself to charity. Miss Green has just come back from abroad. She’s a doctor and is famous for treating patients by using colors. Tom Green is an 18-year-old college student. He likes doing outdoor activities in his free time. Now they think they are living a happy life. They are very satisfied.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹格林的一家人。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如not only does her housework very well but also devotes herself to charity，is famous for，in his free time等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富。