Question

書面表達(dá)（本題20分）

在今年的“地球一小時(shí)(Earth Hour)”活動(dòng)中，中國很多城市的人們都自覺熄燈一小時(shí)，體現(xiàn)了低碳生活(low-carbon life)的新理念。假定你是CCTV-9的記者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下采訪信息，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的新聞稿。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Earth Hour in China

 

Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show！Now it’s 8:45 pm. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In Shanghai, some people are ___________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show! Now it’s 8：45 p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special

time．In Shanghai，some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young

people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also

enjoy themselves．

Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their

families and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What’s more， some people tell me that they will use

paper both sides．（drive less，ride bikes，use plastic bags less…）in their daily life．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹地球一小時(shí)，各個(gè)城市的人們所進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)和他們有什么計(jì)劃來體現(xiàn)低碳生活。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．有一些好的固定短語還有句子。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。