Question

根據(jù)下面的簡(jiǎn)要提示，以“Spring Festival”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇60詞左右的短文。
提示：1. 春節(jié)是中國(guó)人最重要的節(jié)日之一，也是全家團(tuán)聚（get together）的日子。
2. 全家人要打掃房間，穿新衣服，包餃子，一起走親訪友(visit their friends and relatives)，晚上看電視, 發(fā)孩子紅包（give their children a hongbao）。
3. 人們見(jiàn)面時(shí)互相問(wèn)好， 大家都喜歡春節(jié)。                                                                     
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                       

Answer 1

Every year there is the Spring Festival in China. Usually it is in January(一月)or February（二月）. It is the most important festival in China. So before it comes, everyone has to prepare things. They buy pork, beef, chicken, fruit and many other things. And they often make a special(特別的) kind of food called “dumplings”. It means “come together” in Chinese. On the day before the festival, parents buy new clothes for their children and children also buy presents for their parents. On Spring Festival’s Eve, all the family members come back to their home. This is a happy moment. They sing, dance and play cards. Others get the dinner ready. When they enjoy the meal, they give each other the best wishes for the coming year. They all have a good time.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問(wèn)題。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如It is adj to do sth做某事怎么樣；have to不得不等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更加出色。