Question

請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。
贊成的理由 反對(duì)的理由 你的看法
1．廣交朋友 2．浪費(fèi)時(shí)間 ？
3．可自由表達(dá)思想 2．影響學(xué)習(xí) 
4．有利于外語學(xué)習(xí) 3．可能上當(dāng)受騙 (get cheated)
注：字?jǐn)?shù)100—120之間。（書寫不整齊者，酌情扣分。）
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Yours faithfully,  
Zhao Ming

Answer 1

Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends.
Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies.   Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱第三人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，主要敘述了人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)了自己的看法。文中使用了say yes，express，a waste of time，as for等較高級(jí)的短語和詞匯，而且還應(yīng)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞besides，however等為文章增色不少。