Question

為了使同學(xué)們更加健康地成長，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議。假設(shè)你叫張立，用英語向校長寫一封80個詞左右的建議信。所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中你對學(xué)校和老師的建議,并適當(dāng)說明理由。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
our school  our teachers   Suggestions for a Better School Life
1. open the library more often
2. organize more after-class activities
3. give us longer vacations
Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.____________________________________                  
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Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have
a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First , I hope our school
will open the library more often. Reading more books can help us open up our eyes
to the outside world. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class
activities. And I think we should be allowed to have longer vacations because we
need more time to do things like volunteering.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes moreinteresting.
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested
in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give
us less homework and finish class on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

本題是寫一篇給定材料的建議信，書寫時，應(yīng)注意建議信的格式和書信的格式相似，
信結(jié)尾寫上祝愿語和寫信人，信的主要內(nèi)容為談?wù)撊绾斡幸粋�更好的校園生活，給老師提出
的建議和要求，給學(xué)校提出的建議和要求，寫作時應(yīng)注意一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時的合理使
用，條件狀語從句，賓語從句等多種句式的使用，同時要注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。