Question

15．隨著家庭生活條件的提高，現(xiàn)在的孩子或多或少會有一些零花錢．請以How to Spend Our Pocket Money為題寫一段話，內(nèi)容必須包括以下提示要點，詞數(shù)在80-100之間．
1．你從哪里得到零花錢；2．你平常用零花錢做些什么（至少兩點）；3．你覺得用零花錢還可以做些什么更有意義的事（至少兩點）．
注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名：2．文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已付出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life，we kids can have some pocket money                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
 I think I can do something more meaningful我想我可以做一些更有意義的事．
復(fù)合句的應(yīng)用，I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
 I can also donate my pocket money to help poor children in western areas of China so that they can live happily．我也可以把我的零花錢捐出來幫助在中國的西部地區(qū)的貧困兒童，讓他們可以快樂地生活．
這是so taht 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，以便于…．

解答 How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life，we kids can have some pocket money．I usually get my pocket money from my parents．Sometimes，I can get some by selling waste paper and bottles．（從哪里得到零花錢）I often use my pocket money to buy breakfast on my way to school．I also buy some books to help me with my lessons with my pocket money．（用零花錢做些什么）I think I can do something more meaningful【高分句型一】．For example，I can go travelling to a tourist attraction to enjoy myself in the summer holidays．I can also donate my pocket money to help poor children in western areas of China so that they can live happily．【高分句型二】（要點三，用零花錢還可以做些什么更有意義的事）

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