分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們根據(jù)題目內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)生在身邊的感人故事,故事大體內(nèi)容已給出,需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象力、創(chuàng)造力和思維力,把這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整.由題目可知,寫作時(shí)要用第三人稱和第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí),內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:故事講述及作者感受.
重要短語及句型:
in front of
在…前面
offer sth.to sb.
提供某物給某人
at that moment
就在那時(shí)
learn from
向…學(xué)習(xí)
He looked so cold and hungry that the girl wanted to help him.
他看上去如此地又冷又餓以至于這個(gè)女孩想幫他.so…that…如此…以至于,引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句.
The beggar thanked her happily and the girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.
乞丐高興地謝了她,女孩面帶美麗的微笑離開了.happily高興地,副詞,修飾動(dòng)詞thank,with帶著,伴隨狀語.
We should learn from her and help the people in need.
我們應(yīng)該向她學(xué)習(xí)幫助需要的人.learn from sb.向某人學(xué)習(xí);in need介詞短語作定語.
解答 One possible version:
On a cold morning,while I was buying breakfast,I saw a girl in front of me buying some bread and milk.When the girl was about to leave,she found there was a poor beggar under the tree.He looked so cold and hungry that the girl wanted to help him.(高分句型)So the girl went close to the beggar and offered her food to him.The beggar thanked her happily and the girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.(高分句型)(故事講述)
At that moment,I was moved.I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.We should learn from her and help the people in need.(高分句型)(感受)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫提綱作文時(shí),首先要弄懂所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容,最好列一下提綱,然后根據(jù)提綱進(jìn)行寫作就不會(huì)造成離題或偏題,但要注意,文章必須要覆蓋整個(gè)要點(diǎn),行文要注意簡化,不要拖沓冗長,要使用正確的句子,同時(shí)注意,要使用一定的連接詞,比如:first,second,what's more,finally等.再者,在作文完成時(shí)要注意檢查、修改,如果有時(shí)間可以先寫到草稿紙上,再抄到答題紙上,這樣更容易得高分.最后,注意使用一些句型和短語,使整篇文章意思連貫、流暢,方能成就一篇好的作文.
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