Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

我們?cè)趯W(xué)生中做了一個(gè)關(guān)于他們?nèi)ツ睦锒燃俚恼{(diào)查，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告，將調(diào)查結(jié)果表達(dá)完整，并闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。

Places	Seaside	Countryside	Big cities
Reasons	sunshine, seafood, beach, relax	fresh air, beautiful view, friendly people	something new, amusement park, shopping

 

 

 

Different people have different ideas about the places for vacation.

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Answer 1

Different people have different ideas about the places for vacation. We did a survey about the vacation places. Here are the results. Some students want to spend their holiday at the seaside. They think they can enjoy the beautiful beaches and the sunshine. They can also have lots of seafood. A few students prefer the countryside to go on vacation. They like the fresh air and the beautiful view. The people in the countryside are always very friendly. A small number of students choose big cities. They want to see something new. And there are amusement parks in big cities. They can have a lot of fun there. They also like shopping in the big cities. In my opinion, I will go to the seaside on vacation. I’m sure it will be relaxing.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是關(guān)于學(xué)生去某地度假調(diào)查的結(jié)果，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 開(kāi)頭指出不同的人們喜歡到不同的地方去度假，他們對(duì)于自己度假的地方都有不同的觀點(diǎn)，并指出了理由。We did a survey about the vacation places；A small number of students choose big cities. They want to see something new.這些短語(yǔ)和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。