Question

6．以"My best friend"為題，根據(jù)下列要點提示寫一篇作文：
1．Daniel，13歲，陽光中學七年級一班．     2．戴著眼鏡，個子不高．
3．經常做運動，很少吃漢堡和喝可樂．      4．對畫畫很感興趣．沒有很多時間玩電腦游戲．
5．他家附近有一個購物中心，他經常周末在那里購物．
6．今天他穿了一件白色的T-恤和一條藍色的牛仔褲，看起來很干練．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右．
2．短文須包括所有要點內容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
 He thinks they are bad for his health．他認為他們對健康有害．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
He is interested in drawing．他對畫畫感興趣．
be interested in 對…感興趣．

解答 My best friend
My best friend is Daniel．He is 13 years old．He studies in Sunshine Middle School．He is in Class 1，Grade 7．（姓名、年齡、就讀學校班級）He is short and wears glasses．He is wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans today．He looks smart．（外貌）He has a healthy lifestyle．He often exercises and he seldom has hamburgers and coke．He thinks they are bad for his health．【高分句型一】（經常做運動，很少吃漢堡和喝可樂）He is interested in drawing．【高分句型二】And he likes playing computer games too．As a student，he is busy with his study．So he doesn't have much time to play computer games．There is a shopping mall near his home．He often goes shopping there．And he thinks it's a good place to buy things．（生活習慣和愛好）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．本文要求按照所給的題目結合提示內容完成這篇介紹好朋友的作文．寫作中要包含介紹朋友的幾個方面：姓名、年齡、就讀學校班級和外貌、性格及愛好，今天的穿著等進行陳述，表達出朋友的與眾不同的特點等．根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題．寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系．