Question

基礎寫作

請根據(jù)以下的情景說明和寫作要求，使用5個規(guī)范的英語句子描述全部所給的信息內容．

[寫作內容]

陳林是某市第一中學高三年級一班的學生．他在該校學習已近五年．他們學校前面有條大河．過去河水清潔．但前年河對面建了一個化工廠，這個工廠把污水排到河里，致使河水發(fā)黑、發(fā)臭．該廠噪聲也很大．這種情況嚴重地影響了學生的學習、休息和健康．因此，在夏天來臨之際；請你以陳林的名義寫信給市長．要求市長采取措施，更好地關心學生的健康．

[寫作要求]

1．必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給的內容(不包括已經(jīng)給出的句子)；

2．短文必須包含所有內容；不得在信中使用自己的真實姓名和地址；

3．可適當增加細節(jié)或感受，使其連貫完整．

［評分標準］

概括的準確性、語言的規(guī)范性、內容的合適性以及篇章的連貫性．

Dear Mr．Mayor,

　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．________

　　Thank you．

Yours,

Wang Li

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Mr．Mayor, 　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．I have been studying here for five years and there is a big river in front of our school, the water in it used to be very clean．However, a chemical works was set up on the other side of the river the year before last, and the waste water from the factory runs into the river without being made clean and makes the water dirty and smells terrible, what’s more, the factory gives off loud noises．What’s worse, the pollution has brought us great harm in our life．We can hardly study and live normally．Now summer is coming, I hope you can do something to help us． 　　Thank you． Yours, Wang Li