Question

12．Write a short passage of at least 60words about the topic"To be self-confident!"（以"自信!"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文．標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）．
（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Situation：
最近，你們班上將要組織一場"To be self-confident!"為題的主題班會，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文．
提示供參考：（1）簡述你對"自信"的理解．
（2）舉例說明你的觀點(diǎn)．
（3）適當(dāng)進(jìn)行評論．
Boys and Girls，
Life is but a hard and bitter journey．Therefore，I would like to say，"No matter what happens，be self-confident．"【高分句型】
I'd like to share my own experience with you．When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence．I didn't dare to answer teachers'questions in class and was afraid to speak in public．Later，something happened and changed my life．It was a speech contest held at our school．My mother persuaded me to participate，and she had great confidence in me．I chose a topic most appropriate to me-Self-confidence and Success．I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror【高分句型】．With my mother's great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest!
Since then，I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success．So，dear friends，be self-confident and have a brighter future．
Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 重點(diǎn)短語：
1．a(chǎn)nswer teachers'questions 回答老師的問題
2．win the first prize 獲得一等獎
3．the first step towards success邁向成功的第一步
高分句型：
【高分句型一】No matter what happens，be self-confident．無論發(fā)生什么，都要自信．（no matter引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，意思是"無論"）
【高分句型二】I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror
我盡最大努力背誦了整篇演講稿并且在鏡子前練習(xí)了100多遍．（try one's best to do 盡最大努力做某事）

解答 Boys and Girls，
   Life is a hard and bitter journey．Therefore，I would like to say，"No matter what happens，be self-confident．"【高分句型】
   I'd like to share my own experience with you．When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence．I didn't dare to answer teachers'questions in class and was afraid to speak in public．Later，something happened and changed my life．It was a speech contest held at our school．My mother persuaded me to participate，and she had great confidence in me．I chose a topic most appropriate to me-Self-confidence and Success．I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror【高分句型】．With my mother's great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest!
  Since then，I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success．So，dear friends，be self-confident and have a brighter future．
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，平時多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．