Question

你在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了很多科目，列舉出來，并談一談：你最喜歡的學(xué)科是什么？你認(rèn)為什么學(xué)科最有趣；什么學(xué)科最枯燥（dull）；什么學(xué)科最難；什么學(xué)科最重要和最有用。
要求：1. 圍繞此話題，適當(dāng)展開。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言流暢，語法準(zhǔn)確。
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)在80 ~100之間。
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Answer 1

We study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, maths, English, physics, biology and so on. Of all these subjects, I like English best, because it is very interesting and I can learn more about foreign countries. Besides, I can make more friends. I also think English is the most useful. We can use English to communicate with people from other countries. We can read English newspapers, too. I think physics is difficult and boring. I don’t like to study it but I have to. For our students, it is necessary to learn all the subjects well. So we must study hard at every subject. In this way, we can get good grades.

試題分析：這篇作文讓我們圍繞著在學(xué)校里所學(xué)的這些科目，來發(fā)表一下自己的看法。首先我們要先介紹一下我們在學(xué)校里都學(xué)哪些科目。這其中你最喜歡的，你覺得最枯燥的，最難得，最重要的等，要有層次的，分別來說明，不要出現(xiàn)邏輯上的混亂，表達(dá)要有秩序，不能重復(fù)。這是一篇開放式的作文，這個話題，每個人都自己不同的看法，所以可以隨意發(fā)揮。注意使用正確的英語表達(dá)方法，符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，并且語句連貫，文章流暢。
【亮點說明】這篇范文還是比較優(yōu)秀的。首先它包含了題目中規(guī)定的所有要點，并對這些科目分門別類的發(fā)表了自己的看法，意思連貫。文章中也注意使用了一些短語和句型，如Of all these subjects, I like English best, because it is very interesting、Besides, I can make more friends、For our students, it is necessary to learn all the subjects well等。這篇短文的不足之處是文章中所涉及的科目偏少，對這些科目的看法比較集中。