Question

假如你是李華，請根據(jù)提示，給你的英國筆友Michael寫一封信，介紹你們的校園活動，并說說你對校園活動的看法。
注意：
（1）內(nèi)容應(yīng)至少包含兩項校園活動，要求意思、語句連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)80—100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（3）注意書信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。

Answer 1

June 13th, 2011
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life.
We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some of us are interested in sports. They play football and basketball. Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school. We also have some clubs, such as drawing club, dancing club and singing club. But computer is the most popular in our school now. We have a computer room in our school. There’re more than 100 computers in it. Every afternoon, some students go and play computer games. On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner. We like talking in English there. We like English corner very much. Because we practice lots of oral English there.
We hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.
Yours
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，且是給你的英國筆友Michael寫一封信，介紹你們的校園活動，并說說你對校園活動的看法，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的書信。一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，需要注意至少包含兩項校園活動，要求意思、語句連貫，需要注意緊扣文章主題。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意詞數(shù)80—100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；注意書信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。