Question

你的學(xué)校生活怎么樣? 請(qǐng)結(jié)合提示詞以“My School Life”為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文，介紹你的學(xué)校生活。

提示詞：interesting, subject, favorite, friend, playground, outdoor, activity, library

My School Life

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Answer 1

One possible version：

My School Life
My school life is very interesting. We begin our classes at 8 o'clock in the morning. I have four classes
in the morning and two in the afternoon. We study Chinese, math, English, history and some other subjects.
My favorite subject is history. It's easy and interesting. I often talk about it with my classmates. They are
friendly to me. After school we do outdoor activities on the playground or read books in the library. I like
my school life a lot.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的學(xué)校生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)。注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We begin our classes......；We study......；My favorite subject is ......及I like ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)的科目，接下來(lái)介紹和同學(xué)的相處情況，最后指出我喜歡學(xué)校生活。此處用了have four classes， talk about ， After school， on the playground等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。