Question

“世界上最遙遠(yuǎn)的距離莫過于我們坐在一起，你卻在玩手機(jī)”，這是網(wǎng)上流傳很廣的一句話，當(dāng)這句話成為現(xiàn)實(shí)時(shí)，多少會(huì)有一些悲涼。近日，青島市民張先生去爺爺家吃晚飯，飯桌上老人多次想和孫子孫女說說話，但孩子們卻個(gè)個(gè)抱著手機(jī)玩，氣得老人扔下一句“你們就和手機(jī)過吧”，摔盤子離席而去。這與其說是一種不經(jīng)意的習(xí)慣，不如說是對親情的冷漠,。如今越來越多的人成為了手機(jī)控，請你仔細(xì)觀察以下圖片，描述一下圖中展現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象，并且表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，如何解決這樣的問題。

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From the cartoon given above, we can see_____________________________________________
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Answer 1

From the cartoon given above, we can see young people all play with mobile phones.The grand parents have no chance to talk to them,which makes grandparents very angry.
Nowadays，we can see people surfing the mini blog,talking on WeChat with mobile phones everywhere.Especially young people,we call these people “Phone Freak”.We are busy playing with mobile phones,but have no time to talk with our parents.This makes our family emotion become cold.
Mobile phones bring us convinience,however,we shouldn’t treat them as the entertainment tools.We should stay with our parents and grandparents as soon as we are free.Besides,mobile phones are bad for our health.The radiation comes from the mobile phones is quite harmful.

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫作文，我們需要將圖畫內(nèi)容表述出來并闡述自己對這一現(xiàn)象的看法。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如:busy doing sth；treat…as；as soon as等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.