Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)(15分)

隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，人們的生活似乎離不開(kāi)手機(jī)，但是手機(jī)占據(jù)人們的生活帶來(lái)一個(gè)重要的問(wèn)題，人與人之間交流少了，親情、友情應(yīng)該如何維系？請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。

要點(diǎn)所示：

1. 在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中，手機(jī)的發(fā)明改變著社會(huì)，手機(jī)起著重要的作用；

2. 手機(jī)讓人們的聯(lián)系更加容易，讓地球變小了；

3. 但過(guò)去人們常常交談，而現(xiàn)在卻是交流少了，玩手機(jī)的多了；

4. 有些學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲，浪費(fèi)許多時(shí)間，嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)；

5. 你的建議。（至少兩條）

參考詞匯：

手機(jī)：cellphone 智能手機(jī)：smartphone

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。

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Answer 1

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【參考范文】

One possible version：

With the development of IT information industry, there has been a dramatic rise in cell phone, which are now essential to millions of people. But everything has two sides.

On one hand, cellphones contribute a lot to daily life. Firstly, cellphones enable people to easily and quickly communicate with one another whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the multifunction of cell phones that help us survive those boring moments.

On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face skills may decline.

From my perspective, any new invention has its drawbacks, but such negative aspects cannot always diminish its popularity. I strongly suggest that we use cell phones moderately and appropriately to make them more beneficial.

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】

這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘述清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。

【解析】略