Question

【題目】書面表達。

假設你是林濤，上個月回到了家鄉(xiāng)，發(fā)現家鄉(xiāng)變化很大。請根據以下提示寫一篇題為"Changes in My Hometown"的短文，詞數100左右，提示如下：

1．我的家鄉(xiāng)過去是個安靜的小鎮(zhèn)，山清水秀，空氣清新。人們騎自行車或走路出行；

2．現在已變成了現代化城鎮(zhèn)，建起座座高樓，有很多寬闊的馬路。我們住的小區(qū)門口有許多公交車經過，很多人都已買了私家車，出行很方便；

3．但是，這些變化也給我們帶來了許多問題，例如：……

4．我的想法是……

Changes in My Hometown

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Answer 1

【答案】I'm Lin Tao.Last month I went back to my hometown.Great changes have taken place in my hometown. My hometown used to be a quiet small town There were green hills and clean water. The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot. But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars,so it's easy to travel around. However,the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example,the water is not as clean as before. I think we should work together to make our environment much better.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。假設你是林濤，上個月回到了家鄉(xiāng)，發(fā)現家鄉(xiāng)變化很大。要求以"Changes in My Hometown"為題，根據提示材料寫一篇短文。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關系；要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。