Question

【題目】

友情在我們的生活中非常重要，每個人都有各自的朋友。那么朋友間應(yīng)該相同還是不同呢？下面是你和你的朋友Mary的一些信息，請根據(jù)表格進行比較，并發(fā)表對朋友間異同的看法。

注意：1.文章必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息，可進行適當發(fā)揮；

2．詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

	I	Mary
Appearance	160cm，long straight hair	165cm，long curly hair
Personality	shy，friendly	outgoing，friendly
Hobby	read books，interesting，every day	read books，learn a lot，every day
	surf the Internet，relax，sometimes	traveling，open her eyes，once a year

Friendship is very important in our everyday life.Everyone has their own friends，just like Mary and I．We are good friends.

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Answer 1

【答案】Friendship is very important in our everyday life. Everyone has their own friends，just like Mary and I．We are good friends.

We have something different. She is taller and stronger than me. I have long straight hair，but Mary has long curly hair. I'm shy but she is outgoing. We are both friendly. We have some same hobbies. We both like reading. I think it's interesting，while she thinks she can learn a lot from the books. I sometimes like to surf the Internet. It makes me relax. But she likes travelling once a year，and she thinks it can open her eyes.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，內(nèi)容給出的特別詳細：在外貌，性格特征及愛好方面都給出了提示。在寫作時根據(jù)要求首先要對自己和瑪麗之間的相同及不同之處進行比較，然后就朋友之間是應(yīng)該相同還是不同發(fā)表看法。

寫作亮點：這篇短文在進行相同點及不同點比較時句式非常豐富，如：She is taller and stronger than me；I'm shy but she is outgoing. We both like reading.I think it's interesting，while she thinks she can learn a lot from the books.在平時的學習中要注意多記憶例句，寫作中才能熟練運用。