Question

【題目】【2016浙江紹興】書面表達(dá)

76.針對(duì)大部分高中要求學(xué)生住校的現(xiàn)狀，英語(yǔ)課上同學(xué)們就“Would you like to live in school?”這一話題展開調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果，表達(dá)你的意愿并闡述理由。

大部分學(xué)生	愿意	1.方便與同學(xué)交流； 2.學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己；
一些學(xué)生	不愿意	1.在家能休息得更好； 2.與家人相處時(shí)間更長(zhǎng)；
你	……	……

注意：1．短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);

2．你的理由至少兩條；

3．詞數(shù)：80-100；

4．短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：方便的convenient

短文首句：Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.

However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.

As for me, I'd like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on study. What's more, it's a wonderful experience to live with other classmates.

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【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格式給材料作文。這篇短文主要包含三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：贊同住校的學(xué)生的理由，不贊同住校的學(xué)生的理由，表達(dá)自己對(duì)住校的觀點(diǎn)。贊同和不贊同的理由已經(jīng)給出，我們只要用正確的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)出來(lái)就可以了。整篇文章都是觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)就可以。在寫作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，思路清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)。首先介紹大部分人支持住校的觀點(diǎn)，之后介紹一些反對(duì)住校的觀點(diǎn)，最后表達(dá)自己想住校的看法。在短文中作者應(yīng)用了大量的短語(yǔ)和句式，為文章增色。如：Also, However, Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them. As for me, I'd like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on study. What's more, it's a wonderful experience to live with other classmates.等等。