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【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面提示，完成短文。題目“My Ideal School”。詞數(shù)80左右。

1.起床晚，所以希望上學(xué)晚，放學(xué)早。有很多的空余時(shí)間。

2學(xué)校餐廳大而明亮�？梢栽谀抢锍燥埢蛄奶臁�

3.每天都上電腦課。每人一臺(tái)電腦，可以玩游戲。

4.有藏書豐富的圖書館，網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)和游泳池。

5.作業(yè)少，課外活動(dòng)多。周末不用做作業(yè)。

Answer 1

【答案】My Ideal School

I often get up late, so my ideal school starts at 9 a.m. It finishes at 3 p.m., so we will have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall. We can eat and chat there. We can have computer lessons every day. Everyone has a computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of books, and it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It will be better if we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

本文是一篇提綱作文。要求根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于自己理想學(xué)校的文章。在寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。注意必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。這篇作文層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。用了大量短語，如want to do, after-school activities, have to do, at weekends, get up late等，為文章增色不少。